Sunday, January 18, 2009

gaam gharak fakra

bari ke patua teet

var kaniya ke bhete ne athongar lel mar

phatakchand giridhari
janika lotone thhari

pet bigare murhi
ghar bigare burhi

khichri ke teen yaar
chatni dahi ghee achar

1 comment:

  1. Nirbhay ji apnek bahut bariya gup likhlau ha lekin du ta jabar dast galti kelau ha jekra ki sudharu nai ta ahi jagah se hatau ekra

    1.pet bigare murhi, ghar bigare burhi.

    e bat aha bilkul galat likhlau ha aha ta fakra bujhi ka likh deliyai lekin sayad aha k pata nai aichh j aha katek barka baat likhaliyai ha pahil baat jahi ghar me burha burhi nai o ghar ghar nai. kiyek ta jai bujurg sab chhathin tai hamra aha me kanik sanskar bachal aichh nai ta nanga naach kairtau. aha dekh liyau jahi ghar me burha burhi nai chhathin o ghar k haal tahina chhai jahina ki ekta masomat k haal rahait chhai sab kichh rahla k bado hunka lang me kichh nai chhain.

    2. khichri ke teen yaar chatni,dahi,ghee achar
    dene chhiyai chair ta likhne chhi teen ta sahi kahabat chhai:

    khichri k char yaar
    ghee, papar, dahi achar
    ekro sudharu kani.

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